cool i like it!

HI!

I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY

HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON

Hi, could you please continue this story?

The idea is great and the way you write, lets me really be there and feel what Bella & Edward are feeling. The conflict they are in is totally understandable and I really want to know how their story continues.

It would also be interesting to find out how Edward ended up with the Volturi and where Alice and Carlisle seem to know him from. Also where the rest of the Cullen family is and who attacked Bella and her brother are things I'd really like to know.

So if you ever continue this story I'll definetely read it and review. :-)

I really like the story. I think your writing is great and hope you'll post the next chapter soon.

plz update!luv it!

aw!

that was cute! :)

update soon!

i wonder what'll happen to them

it'll only be a matter of time before Aro knows, if he doesn't already...

lol :P

xxzoxx

why haven't you written in ages?

this is really good!

please continue and update soon :)

It was good, I hated the cliff hanger at the end though I'm DIEING to know what happens! Keep up the good work, oh & finish the story! Like I said I'm absolutely dieing to know what happens next! ;)

Hi,

I love it.

Lynne

this is an awsome story please continue

This is a really interesting story idea; normally all I see on Twilight Fanfictions are the cliche-poorly-written love stories that make no sense and strike no feelings. I really like this story because it has an actual plot, with real characters, even though their motives are changed around a little bit. You're such a good writer - I read most of your Max Ride stories, and that's what got me completely hooked. Haha. But your Twilight ones are really good as well.

Soo..Keep up the GREAT work, and try to update soon. :D

Yours, -Soccerislife14

I really like this fanfic though it would be better if u updated quicker. Maybe in the next chapter you could have their relationship progressing until it gets to the point where Edward tries to break Bella and her family out and escape with them?

Wow! This was an amazing chapter and I hope the next chapter comes soon. PLEASE!

Wow! This was an amazing chapter and I hope the next chapter comes soon. PLEASE!

Please please write the next chapter soon

I can't wait for it!