Wow..I like this a LOT better. I didn't particularly like the lawyer...I thought he was a bit of a creep.

oh...wow

this is actually a wonderful story!

with a bastard Lusca...

thanks for the wonderful read :)

-xxx-

D-M likely together

My that was an emotional story. This wasn't the Lusca I took away from the Enzai game/ovas but it's an interesting portrayal of his character nonetheless, and I really enjoyed the lyrics, they set the mood well. Very nice description all around.

I like it. It's great considering you haven't played the game and can only go by the small amount of info the OVAs give. It's really good, and I betcha I couldn't do better even though I have played the game XD Anyway, keep it up.

(You posted this on DA with the name NamelessTheThief, right? I knew I'd seen it somewhere before XD)