This was just so wonderfully sweet.

Wow! This was a great story. Great job.

Aw! That was super cute! I like how it went through the years of Gourry and Lina raising their kids. Gourry is a good dad. These last couple of episodes have been so good for fanfic writing. XD

But it's the dad's right to worry about his kids, especially his daughter! ^_- I'd imagine Lina would worry a bit too, but she's always been one to make a show of shrugging worry off.

This was a very good piece. I think Gourry would be an awesome father, no matter how many kids he ends up having (with Lina :D) someday.

Splendid! I honestly can't wait for more of your second generation stuff. It's some of my favorite stuff you write! Hmm...I can't wait to see what role Xelloss will play. BTW, is Emilie a sorceress or a warrior? She may be able to fireball a table (cute part, BTW) but her brother seems to be the one with the genius to be a great magic user. Seriously, continue with this story line and I shall be waiting!

That was so sweet! I actually got a little choked up at the end.

so... sweet...