Just started reading this tonight.. It's almost 1 in the morning but I'm upset that there isn't anymore to read. If I can, I will try to write up a better review until then keep up the good work! =)

LuvJ as usual, YOU DELIVERED! I'm glad that your exploring the other characters story arc. I like the possibility of Shane and Sharon pairing, And also Ricky and Aron but I'm still skeptical about the Rayanne and Brian encounter. I think this pairing is very volatile, but I still trust you with were going with this.

Last but not least . I wish to express my gratitude to all MSCL fan fiction writers in this board, for taking the time in your busy schedules to update your story and satisfy the hunger the neglected fans of the show like me, hunger for the show that was prematurely pulled away from us. LuvJ, Goodnight girl and many more I hope you'll not get tired of updating.

There's so much in this chapter that makes me laugh. Of course Rayanne and Brain together in almost any capacity is sure to bring the laughs. Then there was that great line from Shane when Jordan asks if he needs to remind him that Sharon is off limits and he replys with "you can remind me now, doesn't mean I'll remember later" that has to be one of my favorites. Then Rickie's realization that Aaron took him to a gay bar not a deserted field to ditch him in. Oh and then Angela thinking to herself that thanks to her mother and her rules she'll be a virgin until she's 90! It was just packed full of giggles and it's great to know that you're just as good at writing comedy as you are at writing drama, it's nice to have a break form all the heavy stuff every now and then. Keep up the great work!

New reader. Absolutely love it. Keep it going.

I was so happy to read this - I've been waiting impatiently. Nice opening one sided angela phone conversation - poor Patti - hilarious Brian, Rayanne and parents - and Ricki, a gay bar, and a gay friend Yeah! well we all hope its going to lead to happiness for him, and soon, but is it? I have to agree it seemed a little short, but that's because I like it so much.

what a great ending to this chapter. Very creative.

The non cannon pairings are so great I love how all of their lives are interwoven in unexpected ways. Can't wait to see where this all goes - I'm so along and looking forward to this ride.

Good chapter, as always. I can't wait to see what Brian and Rayanne get up to and I'm so looking forward to hearing about what Rickie makes of his first venture into a gay bar once he gets over the surprise. The only critisism I have is that this chapter seemed a little shorter than usual and I just want more! ~LJ~

This was a great chapter, with so much to look forward to for later. All of a sudden there are a bunch of potential pairings going on - Brian and Rayanne, Sharon and Shane, Obviously J/A, and then Rickie and a whole bar full of hopeful prospects. Not that they're all going to be getting busy or anything; just, they might not all be so lonely anymore. I feel very hopeful for them.

Oh no Jordan, it's the Love Monster! Don't worry, it doesn't bite. Much.
I loved this chapter, and that he didn't feel right doing it in his car - a testament to the depth of his feelings for her.
I'm off to read your new update!

hehehehehe omg...i'm like so happy for Ricky...i can't even explain it...but i'm so anxious to know what eventually happens with him and Aaron...and aw so cute lol...and then also the part where Brian's dad asked if he needed condoms...roflmao...that was so hilarious...i can so picture Brian becoming all flustered and embarrassed...great great great chapter as always...it literally made my day today...can't wait to read more from you

First and foremost, Brian's dad asking if he needed condoms (especially in regards to Rayanne) made me laugh so hard I nearly peed myself! OMG.

Secondly: Ricky and Aaron! glee! perfect. Made me really really happy.

And where are Angela and Jordan going?

oh yummers - a great chapter - love Angela as Jordan's muse - Patti and Angela conversation is believable and so is Jordan's concern about his feelings - steamy and sweet in the garage - and forward motion - the loft, the Vertigo show, the parents, Very well done.

Wow! That was a VERY hot scene in the garage. I love how you make their encounters so intense and sexy but not sleazy or tawdry at all. They are two young teenagers on the brink of falling in love and I'm so glad that you made Jordan finally realize this and how much Angela means to her. The fact that he was the one to stop them from going all the way just cements how much he truly cares for her because he is putting her first, especially above his sexual needs and c'mon for a 17 year old guy, if that doesnt mean you really love a girl then what does? Lol, no seriously this is progressing so nicely and I can't wait to read more! I love how you portray Jordan and he is one of my all time favourite Jordans in these fanfics because although he is still very much in character he is also starting to evolve and mature into someone who really deserves Angela's love.

This was a good update; I was pretty excited about it and I wasn't disappointed. There was some great motion in their relationship and I'm so glad he's realizing that he's falling for her; hard. I think he needs to introduce her to Kate soon; I'd love to see her take on how they interact! I get the feeling she'd love it.

Great work, as usual and I can't wait for more! Thank you so much for sharing this with us here and good luck with the next chapters!

While it is true that there are parts of this chapter I could recite from memory it does not change the fact that the scene in the garage is HOT! Trust me folks she does not have to put a gun to my head to get me to re-read this stuff! Aside from all the steamy stuff this chapter was chalk full of other great stuff. Mostly from Jordan. Like seeing his internal struggle as he learns to deal with these deep feelings for the first time. I think we all go through a similar thing when we can't decide if that ache in our hearts is a good or bad thing. But Jordan's struggle seems to go a bit further than most which makes the character even more intriguing. Keep up the great work!