| Reviews for Just Another Slip of the Tongue |
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shadowonthesun9909 3/15/11 . chapter 1heres hoping she doesnt say the- OHSNAP! more abiut kiba than i wanted to know... anyway critique... perfect in every way you didnt jump in too fast or start with a back story and speed through it the start was amazing the detail exquisite and the end... d-uuuuuuh... um kiba... no... it was easily the best ive read in a long time if not ever. very good and heres to a succesful career in writing you woulld be great for it |
Guest 2/15/11 . chapter 1 Akamaruuuuuuu! Ahahah. Nice. |
AxelXNamine 12/30/10 . chapter 1Ok that's great. I can't stop laughing. So worried about her leaving he doesn't even realize he called for his dog. :D |
Safirefairy 10/6/10 . chapter 1LMAO... I like it. It's well-written. |
NeitherSaneNorInsane 8/20/10 . chapter 1Om my god what a fail kiba I mean you were worried about her but you ended up calling your DOG how embarrassing |
Lissa.chann 2/12/10 . chapter 1Lmao. Truly funny. |
The-Twinkle-In-Your-Eye 12/1/09 . chapter 1oh shit!:0 hahaha! |
swandreamer 11/25/09 . chapter 1OMG! He actually mention who? wah! P |
fantasytyper 11/24/09 . chapter 1that is hilarious at the end and the rest is awesome |
the elsinatr 6/8/09 . chapter 1brilliantly written! kudos for creativity! Keep it up! |
Carlalalita 3/16/09 . chapter 1Okay that was worth waiting for the end! Akamaru - never expected that, but I probably should have,huh? |
Pathetically Lovely's so lazy 3/15/09 . chapter 1 oh, poor kiba. |
Mizame 3/13/09 . chapter 1First: Well written, in depth and intricate. Grammar is good and Wording is fantastic. Second: HILARIOUS! KUDOS! Overall, baby, you have one very god Lemon right here. I love it. Akamaru... |
Miss Hydrangea 3/10/09 . chapter 1Hahaha... That was unexpected. Having read the summary, I'd expected Naruto to be called out, along with another girl, but I couldn't decide whom it would be. I was wrong on both counts, but the end was certainly more interesting for it. XD |
ALLRRPRP 3/5/09 . chapter 1OMG, brilliant! _ |