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Reviews for: Pas de Trois
James Birdsong
2009-11-11 . chapter 8
Sweet. Cool. Good. Hooray.
Sheo Darren
2009-11-11 . chapter 8
Not only did you still leave me dramatically hanging from the lip of a cliff regarding the previous chapter, you now hit me with one of the slickest and most brilliant examples of sweet talk, causing me to gleefully tumble head over heels over your writing twice in a row and twice in a single occasion.

:))

Wonderful! Do remember to pull me up later from the crumbling cliff side, my unerring compass. ^_^
Sheo Darren
2009-10-22 . chapter 7
0_0

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NOES! AIKO! YAMADA!

I have been cliffhangered by the girl I adore. How mean! T-T

lol kidding kidding ^_^

Well, that was a completely unexpected dose of drama. Hit like a bolt from the blue. Very startling. The hairs on the back of my neck rose as if electrocuted. A good twist!

Aside, I notice I'm submitting review # 13. Uh, oh :D
James Birdsong
2009-10-16 . chapter 7
Oh. Cool. Perhaps cool anyway. It is not bad.
Sheo Darren
2009-08-27 . chapter 6
lol

This update lives up to every letter of the title. It also combines, contrasts and blends the real and unreal into such a fun reading. From fantasy (Keiko's early fan-girling) to reality check (Touga, you jerk!) to lucky rebound ("Duke" Suzuki) and then comedy in the form of those who demand a shrubbery, this proves a well-executed and excellently presented "summary" of a girl's life.

(Wow, I said a lot there for such a short fic.)

Also: Monty Python is not geeky! (WoW, maybe.) It's advanced ^_^

Kudos!
James Birdsong
2009-08-24 . chapter 6
Good drabble ^-^
Sheo Darren
2009-06-12 . chapter 5
... wow...

And now I think I have gained a fetish for holding hands after reading how you described Keiko and Suzuki's "receptive behavior" lol

You're a mistress when it comes to this kind of stories ^_^ Keep it up!
James Birdsong
2009-05-23 . chapter 5
Excellent
James Birdsong
2009-03-20 . chapter 4
Good four drabbles
Sheo Darren
2009-03-15 . chapter 4
Dere moment! Dere moment! ^_^
Sheo Darren
2009-02-10 . chapter 3
... aw... that's so tsundere, isn't it? I wuv tsunderes ^_^
wakaba12
2009-02-09 . chapter 3
Aww. I never thought about those two before. Cute.
Sheo Darren
2009-02-07 . chapter 2
oh lol I know that scenario! ^_^

So cute...
Sheo Darren
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
lol nerds lol
wakaba12
2009-02-05 . chapter 2
Cute! But what are the boys' names again? I forget. Update soon.
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