 The Hellion 11/23/04 . chapter 11 Is, was, and will always be one of my favorite stories. It's got stuff I normally hate like slash and OC's yet I still really enjoy this fic. Everytime I read this though I hate The Junkyard more, but its kind of a good kind of hate. |
 Jasmine32 11/6/04 . chapter 11Superbly well written, I absolutely loved this story. |
 Mistal 10/7/03 . chapter 11aaww this is such a good story!
excellent work!
you had me cry at some point! and smile at other point!
I like the end! very good story!
happy it;s a happy ending!
Mistal
peace |
 eloisa 8/26/02 . chapter 11 THAT WAS GREAT! ok, maybe not that great but great! (get it? well you'll get it!) I was a little confuse at first cause geeezz luizzzz turning the story to different points of view, who wouldn't get confused? I bet you got a little dizzy too when your writing this fic. But anyway it turn out to be really cool. I mean I'm not really a yaoi liking person (sometimes I still think its kinda ridiculous, please don't hate me cause I'm an open minded person and it really happens in real life right?) but the squallseifer pairing makes me think its kinda cute. The humor you add was right too. Keep writing the good stuff. Good luck! |
 Groovy Blue 8/14/02 . chapter 7Jen and Matt are losers :P. Steve's okay. Mai's cool. |
 schwarz 5/8/02 . chapter 11 This was interesting. I'm glad you didn't try to redeem 'The Garbage squad', or whatever the hell their name was, because I found them HOMICIDALLY irritating. I wished for all of them to be tortured to death, alas, you kept them alive. Fuck though. I HATED them. Good fic.
schwarz |
 Ponder 4/2/02 . chapter 11I loved it! I really liked the ch. where you made Squall go crazy. I think you need a one shot sequal. Just for us who are dying to see how Squall and Seifer get along after this. |
 Kaji The Harlequin 3/23/02 . chapter 11I love it! i like how you described squall's eyes when he was,like,insane. i also like Junk Yard, selphie wuth assasin friends. go fig. anyway please keep writing Yaoi stories. and do one with irvine and zell bi. but not with eachother,that would NOT be right. |
 CJ May 3/18/02 . chapter 10 I wanted to say that, I loved that story. I really like how you change points of views to get everyone's idea of what's going on. I couldn't stop reading! I loved it! Keep writing!
Smiles
CJ May |
 milkyway 3/11/02 . chapter 1 oh yeah, I forgot to mention
PLease write a sequal! Pretty please?) |
 milkyway 3/11/02 . chapter 11 would of been cool to see the sex scene with Squall and Seifer on the last chapter. 'Cause I think you could of got into a lot of description, you know.. like Seifer's reaction to Squall's torture. Cause I'm sure if you've been whipped 87 times (or something) then you would have some pretty nasty scars. And then you said,"It pains me to look at him" You could of elaberated on that, like how bad his scars really are.
Anyway, not trying to be mean or anything.
But, I honestly really do love this story !) |
 KNW 3/3/02 . chapter 11One word to say: Sequel? |
 sidheranma 3/3/02 . chapter 11 This is a great story. I hope you write a sequal or just another new story. |
 Arisa K 2/24/02 . chapter 10 I absolutely love it! Wonderful.. |
 KNW 2/24/02 . chapter 10I am so glad you brought them back, and it didn't seem at all forced either, well done, I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for more! |