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The Hellion
2004-11-23 . chapter 11
Is, was, and will always be one of my favorite stories. It's got stuff I normally hate like slash and OC's yet I still really enjoy this fic. Everytime I read this though I hate The Junkyard more, but its kind of a good kind of hate.
Jasmine32
2004-11-06 . chapter 11
Superbly well written, I absolutely loved this story.
Mistal
2003-10-07 . chapter 11
aaww this is such a good story!

excellent work!
you had me cry at some point! and smile at other point!

I like the end!! very good story!
happy it;s a happy ending!

Mistal
peace~
eloisa
2002-08-26 . chapter 11
THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! ok, maybe not that great but great!!! (get it? well you'll get it!) I was a little confuse at first cause geeezz luizzzz turning the story to different points of view, who wouldn't get confused? I bet you got a little dizzy too when your writing this fic. But anyway it turn out to be really cool. I mean I'm not really a yaoi liking person (sometimes I still think its kinda ridiculous, please don't hate me cause I'm an open minded person and it really happens in real life right?) but the squall+seifer pairing makes me think its kinda cute. The humor you add was right too. Keep writing the good stuff. Good luck!!!
Groovy Blue
2002-08-14 . chapter 7
Jen and Matt are losers :P. Steve's okay. Mai's cool^^.
++schwarz
2002-05-08 . chapter 11
This was interesting. I'm glad you didn't try to redeem 'The Garbage squad', or whatever the hell their name was, because I found them HOMICIDALLY irritating. I wished for all of them to be tortured to death, alas, you kept them alive. ** though. I HATED them. Good fic.

++schwarz
Ponder
2002-04-02 . chapter 11
I loved it!! I really liked the ch. where you made Squall go crazy. I think you need a one shot sequal. Just for us who are dying to see how Squall and Seifer get along after this.
Kaji The Harlequin
2002-03-23 . chapter 11
I love it!!!! i like how you described squall's eyes when he was,like,insane. i also like Junk Yard, selphie wuth assasin friends. go fig. anyway please keep writing Yaoi stories. and do one with irvine and zell bi. but not with eachother,that would NOT be right.
CJ May
2002-03-18 . chapter 10
I wanted to say that, I loved that story. I really like how you change points of views to get everyone's idea of what's going on. I couldn't stop reading! I loved it! Keep writing!
Smiles :)
CJ May
milkyway
2002-03-11 . chapter 1
oh yeah, I forgot to mention:
PLease write a sequal! Pretty please? ;)
milkyway
2002-03-11 . chapter 11
would of been cool to see the sex scene with Squall and Seifer on the last chapter. 'Cause I think you could of got into a lot of description, you know.. like Seifer's reaction to Squall's torture. Cause I'm sure if you've been whipped 87 times (or something) then you would have some pretty nasty scars. And then you said,
"It pains me to look at him" You could of elaberated on that, like how bad his scars really are.
Anyway, not trying to be mean or anything. ;)
But, I honestly really do love this story ! :)
KNW
2002-03-03 . chapter 11
One word to say: Sequel?
sidhe_ranma
2002-03-03 . chapter 11
This is a great story. I hope you write a sequal or just another new story.
Arisa K.
2002-02-24 . chapter 10
I absolutely love it! Wonderful..
KNW
2002-02-24 . chapter 10
I am so glad you brought them back, and it didn't seem at all forced either, well done, I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for more!
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