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Shadewolf7
2009-12-13 . chapter 2
Interesting. Are you going to continue it?
Fire of the lioness
2009-12-10 . chapter 1
It's been so long since your last update! This is one of the few well-written Harry-finds-relatives-from-the-G-boys-stories. So please don't leave us hanging any longer.
berkie88
2009-12-05 . chapter 2
Observant isn't he? *g* I don't spend anough time around 8-year-olds to know what they are like, but I like him this way! While I don't mind clueless!innocent!Harry as much if he's a kid, it would really work if you are going to do this from his pov.

Duo was probably the one to great them so he could tell the others about Heero's family right? I'm not complaining. :-P Duo is my favorite pilot! Though Heero's in second place...
The Dursley's aren't putting up a very good front as caring family now are they? I guess they don't have to practise often, and don't consider Duo enough of a threat to behave in front of him...

Do they dislike Duo because of the reasons Harry gave or because he was a wanted terrorist? I can understand Harry not knowing of it but I'd think they might have known it. The way you added the fact that he was wanted in was amusing btw: "Featured most prominently was a large newspaper clipping about Surrey Zoo, which had been tapped over an old wanted poster for a teenage boy with braided hair." lol!

I must admit, the summary at the beginning of this chapter caught my interest: "Now he has to work out how his parents really died; why people want to kidnap him; Duo, who is, or was, a wanted terrorist; and Heero, the scary teen who doesn't seem impressed with his new family." Kidnap him? Interesting. Is Heero also going to be unimpressed with Harry? Considering he's been following him around and appears to be interested I'd think he'd like him, especially since Duo thinks they are alike. But what's that about Harry's parents? According to the story summary he still has magic so is this figuring out they didn't die in a 'carcrash' or that you changed canon?

While I really like your HP/Doctor Who crossover as well, I do hope you'll take the time to continue this on as well. There is nothing about it on your Author's page... Still interested in Gundam?
AnimaLynx
2009-11-04 . chapter 2
OMG really you got to update this is like the best story ever...~! God I love this crossover. Please write more soon!
Dragon'sRubyEyes
2009-11-01 . chapter 2
Are you EVER going to update?! Or should I just write this off as a lost cause? Has it been discontinued?! I hope not, I really like this story! Please update! PLEASE! I'll give you a cookie?

-Eyes
loretta537
2009-10-16 . chapter 2
this is a great story so far, i cant wait to see what happens next
Cassandra K.
2009-10-15 . chapter 2
What's going to happen! Heero's the one related to Harry? But, er, not to be awful, but Heero's never struck me as the cuddly type. Judging by the way he's watching Harry, is it safe to say he knows Harry is related to him? Ah, you have such an interesting story! :D

And you pulled Harry off wonderfully too, he's not an abused!timid!cutesy! child in this story, but instead is a lovely, quirky, smart!spunky!I'm-straightforward-and-what-are-you-going-to-do-about-it? eight year old. Granted, eight-year-old kids that are neglected/abused would have different behaviour as compared to the typical happy eight-year-old, but I've never been fully convinced that Harry's innate pride(as canon) would have just let him fall into any sympathetic stranger's arms.

You aren't abandoning the story, are you? *waves mesmerism pendant threateningly* This story has a lot of potential; there aren't any striking mistakes with the grammar, and the characterisation, while mostly focussing on Harry and his family, with a little of the Gundam boys, is nice and rings true. The style is fairly smooth and carries the reader along nicely with the lead-up to the discovery of Heero being the unlikely stalker (I still find it oddly hilarious that he was discovered and told off by an eight-year-old). xD

I certainly hope you update soon! :D
Serenity Moon2
2009-10-06 . chapter 2
This story is rather interesting; I can’t wait to see what happens next. It is defiantly different going about it in Harry’s POV; it’s certainly a different way of doing it, but still just as interesting.
faith bonksie
2009-10-06 . chapter 2
ah dont stop there!
This is so good!!
Please continue soon I cant wait for some more!!
mishap
2009-10-05 . chapter 2
I just love young Harry stories and this is shaping up to be a good one. It would be absolutely wonderful if after Harry finds out about who his relative is if you could get Quatre to go zero on the Dursley's as Duo would put it. I don't know why, but I just get a kick out of innocent looking Quatre scaring the beejesus out of people. I really can't wait to see where you go with this and hope you get a chance to work on it soon.
ForeverSilenced
2009-10-04 . chapter 2
Please update soon! I love this story.. is Hee-chan gonna train our little Harry? ohh I hope so
akuma-river
2009-10-04 . chapter 2
I like this, it's an interesting take on things.
Obscure Stranger
2009-09-22 . chapter 2
This is awesome! Please write more soon!
Karasu Metsuki
2009-09-19 . chapter 2
wonderful, i love this story ! the ending was awsome, i thought that harry was very well done. Please update soon.
kirallie
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
Liked how Harry told Heero off for following him and Duo agreed. More please?
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