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NinjaTeddy
2009-07-19 . chapter 100
Ahh, this was great. I sat down to read it and didn't stop once it just really drew me in. I loved how it wasn't totally obvious Royai in all of them, but you knew it was Royai anyways. That's the feeling I got from it, at least. As for "Hughes" from chapter 97, I'm almost completely sure it was Havoc. He's the only person I can think of who ever calls Roy chief. When you said it was a manga only character it through me off, but them I remembered that Havoc was only in a wheelchair in the manga. Again, I really enjoyed it, and I would really like to read more of your work.
causmicfire
2009-05-06 . chapter 36
love this one
causmicfire
2009-05-06 . chapter 35
'“And recently , when confronting Ishballan troops with General Hackett and his battalion, the General asked you to watch his back while among the enemies. I’m informed that you stared at his back the entire time – in fact, you quite unnerved some of the other soldiers.”' - lol, classic

*pats Roy on the head* Oh, when Riza finds out
causmicfire
2009-05-06 . chapter 33
lol, Hawkeye, I think your puppy still needs some training.

I like all the little details, messy ponytail, and the groan that couldn't possibly be a groan in her case.
causmicfire
2009-05-06 . chapter 32
Some things are better left alone, Havoc.

Enjoying that Hawkeye doesn't just say "I am"
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 30
"...one ex-con in a can..." lol, great way to introduce Barry!

I like having this from Fuery's pov, and getting his reactions to their convo.
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 29
This piece fits very well with Mustang's eagerness to accomplish his goals.
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 28
lol, score one for Fullmetal.

I like the little detail about him snarling over not having tissues.
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 27
lol, I love that Havoc has it all figured out, and that Breda calls him out about dependency
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 26
to use the prompt, it's a clever interpretation.

Also, love the fact that it's based upon the assumption that Hughes to him what happened.
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 25
Aww such a sweet moment, noticing the tear tracks despite the fact that he's about to pass out.
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 24
Wow, that last line made me really sad. I like that he's thinking about how they may not have the same limitations, reminds me how much he actually plans things out.
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 23
Wonderful chapter!

I like what you did with the bubbles in the beginning, and her thought about the direction of the surface being dull and just something she thins, doesn't act on.

Also the last three paragraphs are love. I can see/hear her laughing at him as he recovers from rescuing her.
causmicfire
2009-05-05 . chapter 22
This may be short, but that last line sure does say a lot.

I like the idea of him being afraid that their god does exist.
Kryptech
2009-04-23 . chapter 100
Excellent conclusion! I've really enjoyed these 100 glimpses into the lives of Mustang and Hawkeye. Great work!
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