I have to say that I thought was very neat - well done! The plot was clever and of a good lentgh but without being long enough to bore me stiff. I think the twist with Merlin in Lancelot's boxy was quite inspired and I think that your characters changed and developed cleverly throughougt. I'm not sure that I fully understood the situation with Gwen being unnoticeable; it was slightly unnecessary. On a last note, I'm glad that you portrayed Uther as having a good side at last. I'm sure many writersout there see him as completely evil... Rated 7/10. Please see w.scribblenote. for full review.

ScribbleNote - Arthur/Merlin review author

I adored this... It was truly amazing thanx for sharing x

That is actually really good! A super blend of BBC goodness and the entirety of the Arthurian Legends! Sword and the Stone AND The Excaliber Legend? Impressive...

I loved this. Can't wait for the BBC to do the big reveal scene when Arthur finds out about Merlin's magic, what about you?

Queenie xx

i loved great story

I liked the detail in this story. I got a little confused about what happened to Gwen- why she went all...invisible and then not, but I did read this late at night, so it's possible I skipped over some vital detail.

Anyway, good job.

this is great...but what happened to gwen?

Wo! Awesome story, i totally loved it!

This was a really interesting take on the legend. In fact this is the best I've read that incorporates the legend into the tv show. It was also wonderfully written. You have a clear and engaging writing style. A+ :)

I really liked this, especially how you had Merlin and Arthur kinda take on each other's personalities for a while.

All he got was more laughter and a mouthful of hair. Damn the man! They would most definitely be having a talk about how to treat royalty, even those you’ve been intimate with… and he would order a haircut – in fact he may make it a royal decree that all men must have their hair cut above the neckline. - ZOMG. Win. XD

Lovely ending!

D:! How could Lancelot not remember/meet Gwen? SIGH. Damn you and your cliffhanging-ness.

“I think,” said Lancelot softly, as he buttoned up his shirt. “That I need not call you sire any more in private.” - PERFECT. ENDING. DUDE. LAWLZ.

“Merlin?” He almost choked. “The most useless servant in the history of the world… most likely to trip over his own shadow and… and.” - omg, trip over his own shadow XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD :3

LANCELOT! :D

Again, awesome fight scene.

-clicks over to the next chapter- :3

“You know,” he said loudly. “I could turn you all into toads.” - DO IT! YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO!