Excellent story! Since I pro-publish, I'm used to having my internal editor on at all times. It was wonderfully silent throughout 25 chapters of exceptionally good storytelling. Stylistically, technically, this was flawless. From the standpoint of pure entertainment, it's probably one of the best pieces of fanfiction on the net and is easily superior to a vast majority of original work published, imo.

I can't wait to read the sequel!

Very enjoyable fic. Easy to follow even for a reader who has never seen the show. No, really. Not one episode, ever.

A friend suggested this 'ship to me and I selected this fic because it was nice and long. I was more than pleased with my choice and very much look forward to reading more for this story arc.

I can't say how accurate your characterizations are, but I certainly enjoyed Jennifer and Ronon. Not to mention Lorne and Tello. Thanks for your hard work, and for sharing your fic with us.

-Ellie

“Because your sparring session tomorrow is with me.”

Wa-ha-ha! I could very easily 'hear' Ronon saying this. He may not say much, but when he does...

Really nice story, thanks for writing it. Looking for more now. Where's the sequel, :D?

Nicely done! Very believable that Ronin would not like golf. Nice twist at the end.

Okay, I did NOT see that one comin'. Can't wait for the new story!

Hey pretty darn good for your first post for SG:A! I was hooked immediately, Jennifer and Ronon are my favorite "could be" couple. Thanks!

Another great cliffhanger!

I haven't been feeling too well & missed the last couple of chapters. But it was great to read them all in one go. I am certainly looking forward to the sequal.

P.S. If you ever feel like a good squee about Ronon & Jennifer or just general talk most of us hang out on the Doctor and Wildman threads here

stargate. and here

forum./

Hope you can join us. :)

Great chapter! Wonderful job!

So Jen was reprogrammed to do something else? Oh boy... everyone is just using and abusing her (execpt Ronon and other Atlantis team members).

So Jen is special because of a gene she has? Interesting. And wonderful job!

I can't wait till the sequal! *excited*

SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL! Please?

This was absolutely fantastic and I can't wait for you to complete it! Only hopefully Abatello turns out to be a good guy 'cos I was starting to like him!

I really hope that that all means there will be more coming soon, the twist at the end was definitely magnificent! i can't wait.

I think I actually like this story better because of the cliffhanger. Really enjoyed the gamut of emotions Ronon was going through, and franky, him being jealous was so him and totally hot, because it shows his possessiveness for Jen, but not in a bad way. Liked the explanation of the "bestowing of will", how it works to balance the relationships between men and women on Sateda. Lots of squee over Ronon's vulnerability.

And, oh, the shocker...Dr. Feist is in on it all along. Wonderfully written because in the end, she doesn't come off as purely evil, which makes for an even better villian. I look forward to the sequel.

It is official. You, Nika, and Keira are my Stargate Atlantis Ronon/Keller trinity!

I love your work. Thanks for the update can't wait to see where the next part of this series takes us!

Love it. Love it. Love it. :D and I can't wait to see where the sequal to this goes