hmm. could Nagasawa be investigating hollowfication, like Aizen? or is he investigating hollows in general and some of them got loose. guess i have to wait till the next chapter. update soon!

Be safe and well

Slop Doggy

Nice chapter! Guess Mayuri's gonna be mad that he let an evil scientist escape his squad! What is it that he's doing, and who is he targeting? I can't wait for this guy to die! Keep Writing!

yikes! what's nagesawa planning? He seems like a sadistic *beep*

And Yachiru! LOL! she only sleeps for a minute! haha, poor Ikkaku and Yumichika, XD

I really hope to see the shinigami pwn nagesawa soon!

huh wonder what he's up to. Probally nothing good... infact I know its nothing good.

ontop of which why send... hm to quote the great admiral ackbar "It's a trap!"

Yes he does indeed know when something is a trap.

Hm curious I have a feeling the next chapter will be quite revealing.

geez, Yachiru is sure taking after Kenpachi. i feel sorry for Nagasawa later in the series. and, yes...Aizen's WTF?! moment was priceless. i printed the picture to save it. >:-D Update soon.

Be safe and well

Slop Doggy

ouch! Poor Yachiru!

rawr, I really hate Nagesawa and his two annoying underlings. Yachiru should seriously just go and teach them all a lesson, and Yumichika and Ikkaku. Yeesh.

I liked the comment on the surprise attacks that get launched all over the place at the fifth Lol.

can't wait to see the next update!

Yeah it was kinda impressive to see Aizen have the moment of 0_o wtf?

Anyways a good chapter. Boy those new guys get douchier and douchier with each passing chapter. I mean Yumichika comes in and tries to be all polite and nice and stuff and they try and kill him. Seriously wtf?

Well I'm sure they'll get whats coming to them shortly.

Now, I'm really interested. Until now, this story, while fun, hasn't been particularly twisty, but this chapter has added some definite mystery. Thank you!

Shawn

I can't wait to see Yachiru's bankai! And isn't Yumichika's rank higher than one of Nagasawa's cronies? So why would he have to treat both of them with more respect? Oh wait, never mind, I kinda forgot that they're arogant bastards! The Aizen WTF moment was awesome, but I personally liked it when Ichigo appeared the best. Keep Writing!

Oh yeah, now THAT'S a jerk.

Hope he dies in the next two chapters?

Wow, I'm disliking Nagasawa more and more by the the second! Sure, Kenpachi was, er, a tad violent, but a captain saying his squad disgusts him is just plain stupid. (For lack of better words.)

Please hurry and update!

~ MaeKitt

As for your opinion's on the latest bleach chapters I felt that Tousen was the weakest mentally of all the captains due to his blind following of another captain. So I'm not surprised the he may be the 1st to go. As for your story, the 11th squad will always be filled with stong & true warriors who will always fight for what they feel is right, regardless of what anybody else says.

wow now that guy is what we in the bussiness like to call a douchebag.

I get the strangest feeling that this guy will only delve further into douchebaggery before he gets the axe at some point.

Good chapter as always, I look foward to future updates

An aside

I liked the way Tousen went down. It was kind of fitting, had he stayed blind he would have won. Instead he got arrogant and overly excitied with being able to see that he died for it. Killed by his own vice-captain a very fitting end for him.

I do wish we could have seen more from his bizzare release. Though I wish we could have seen his real Zanpakto (though it makes me wonder if he ever had one in the first place? Huh I guess his friend would have been a hell of a shinigami) I'm waiting for the next chapter which will no doubt be about Tousen and his friend.

RAWR! I hate that dude too! who does he think he is, dissing the other squads like that? rawr!

But on the other hand, I thought your writing was great! I love how you showed the disgust of the other eleventh division members, and the way Nagasawa carries himself is really well done. I can't wait to see the next update.