Cute!~~

Actually, mentioning the gutter just shoves my dead deeper into it.

This had me laughing and grinning so hard my face hurts. Thanks.

Great work xD

I think the yam was cute, in all honesty! And I think this story was just as good as Never Did Run Smooth if that's the story you're referring to in your author's note! Since I've now read both of them, I can say they're both very good.

It's nice to see Dinobot being so gentle with the rodent. And the part where he says rodent, the way he says it, and Rattrap's knees get weak, so to speak, GAH! Brilliant! ^.^

Another good start to a day with another good fic on my list. Thanks for sharing!

Oh wow!! Great work! Wonderful job! I'm glad you did this. Great work! I loved how you portrayed Dinobot and Rattrap. Great job!!

Love. I love it. I don't know what else to say.

Oh, wait, I do.

Hott DAYUM!

My first DinobotxRattrap porn... YEY! ^^


I still lvoe it!

'Get our minds out of the gutter'? We're reading Dinobot/Rattrap smut and you tell us that? What?

Also, your Rattrap is love.

This was well written, sexy, and wonder of wonders, perfectly in character. Dierdre is so happy she is now referring to herself in the third person.

Brava! *Favorites with gusto*

That was one of the most In-character Dinotrap near-smut I've ever read! 8D You capture the banter between perfectly, and even managed the cuddles and snuggling! KUDOS TO YOU! *dies of happy*

This was the most awesome, hilarious and sweet thing I've read in weeks.
Really, really nice.
I givez you cookies for this 8D

Dinobot being gentle and cuddling Rattrap... I think I just had multiple fangasms.

I see how Rattrap completely brushes off his "best friend's" jerkitude even though he acknowledges everybody else's. That's very telling, there.

Aww, Dinobot, you are totally cuddling him. Don't even try hiding it. Primal knows anyway, look at that knowing grin!

YOU DO NOT USE YOUR ALLIES AS SHIELDS. For that matter, holding someone up in the line of fire is probably on a list somewhere of the Jerkiest Things You Can Do In The Known Universe. AND THAT'S *CANON*.

Ha ha, Dinobot likes trashing the spiders. Totally IC. He would've felt left out if he didn't get to fight somebody while the other Maxies were getting whaled on.

"You smell." AH, THE IMMATURE PETTY JAB. Might as well say, "You win." :)

Also, Dinobot doesn't eat anything that can't struggle. I dunno if he thinks it's more honorable that way or just more fun.

Every base they round is a bigger battle than the last. Dinobot has enough issues to rival National Geographic. But man, he's trying. Look at him try! He wants this as bad as Rattrap, and it comes across so well here.

SHINGUARD FORTRESS! SQUE!

I like how Dinobot is here. Very dominating yet tightly controlled, forcing himself to be gentle, but bending Rattrap to his mercy. If nothing else, he'd master that part easily. Control, he's familiar with.

HE BREATHED UNDER HIS CHIN. I CAUGHT THAT. EVERYONE ELSE IS GOING TO THINK DIRTY THOUGHTS. THEY DO NOT KNOW RATS. (Or they just weren't paying attention to the rest of the sentence.)

Aah, Dinobot has a happy rat. That was worth it, now wasn't it, Mighty Warrior? Yes it was.

YOU ARE AWESOME. I GIVE THIS FIC MY SEAL OF APPROVAL. FEEL FREE TO SET STORIES IN MY 'VERSE ANYTIME.