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Mecha-Foot
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story. There's something lush and decadent about while at the same time very grounded, a group of teenagers (or perhaps twenty-somethings) having a New Year's Eve after-after-after party for just them. You set the tone very well; captured the drowsy tired, intoxicated feeling when you've been up forever and have had a full night and are drinking... I liked how Nephrite was cheating, and how Ami figured out. Heh.
Anyway, my last little thing is I liked how you didn't automatically put the Senshi in dresses of "their" colors.
Merry Faerie
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Sweet, nicely paced story. I liked the details and the dialogue. I'm just annoyed with myself for not reading this during the ficathon. Good job!
Monito
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
very funny and very sweet!
Celanire Fitzgerald
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
I really like description of the scene; it was kind of PWP (Plot, What Plot)but you definitely made up for it with your way of writing. You managed to convey the relaxed, friendly atmosphere and I could feel the exhausted, yet comfortably mood. Good job!
LethalxRose
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
Awh! This was cute. I can totally imagine all of the senshi/generals acting like this. Too bad ami was feeling tired.. i would have loved to read more of the night! haha and i love how Neph cheated :]
DyanaRoseJill
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
Oh that was very cute. I loved the interaction that you had between all of them.
In particular, I liked your calm description of Kun and Endy throwing poker chips at each other.
Mercury would be the one to spot the trick too.

Very nice
MegTao
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
Spirit-hime put it best, I think, Mercury does betray very elegantly. I like the kind of Mardi Gras air you gave to this story, and I think a sleepy Mercury was the perfect narrator. Nice work. ^_^
DavisJes
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
Too cute. Nice work.
DestinyManifested
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
VERY sweet and nice to have a Mercury-centric piece; you normally focus on Kev/Mina (not that I'm complaining)
sailorashes
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
this was really good. you captured the mood perfectly. it seemed magical...
SailorPikaAngel
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
Aw.. how cute! I enjoy reading ami/zoi fics! For some reason, I felt the fic was slow but in a good way! It was as if Ami in her sleepy state, would randomly notice things as if she would just notice it as she is drifting off to sleep! I also really liked the details you provided of the girls outfits and it fit them well. I wish there were more ami/zoi cuteness, but the last scene was cute too! Him walking down a long corridor with his love cuddling in his arms! THanks for a great read and I look forward to reading more!
sara
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
lmao, the generals are smoking weed?? terrible, you should make a one shot about one of their kids getting caught with it =D and finish economics while you're at it =)
Marisusi
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
hahaha that was great!
AngelONight
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
aww so cute
they're all so perfect together, the chemistry so undeniable
it's an awesome one-shot, and haha, poor nephrite, i can't believe he expected merc not to notice! he must know who he's dealing with!
anyway, totally loved it!
Melinda Sandy Halliwell
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
I absolutely love this piece. Mercury does, indeed, betray elegantly, her quick mind solving the riddle even through a haze of exhaustion and alcohol.

What I really love though is that this is a sweet SilMil piece without any real cloud of doom hanging over it.
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