Wow. I'm confused by one of your last reader's reviews. Mainly, because this was hot. And there doesn't need to be full-blown sex for the characters to get off. These guys dry humped. There's not enough stories out there that make dry humping sound anything but pathetic, but you made it hot again...somehow... o.o; Wow! I think I need to go take a shower...cool off.

Ahem...oh, right, the review. Though brief, your writing is fantastic. Maybe that's *why* it is? Not a lot of needless detail thrown on, just enough to picture the scene clearly as if it were another episode. Some people might complain that this story needs to be longer but I think it's great as is! Awesome work.

This was really okay, actually... it would've been best if you had left the reference to "coming" out of it, mostly because there WAS no sex scene... a simple flufflet would have been great.

But other than that, the cute romance was sweet!

please continue. it must not end like that..please?!

mel storm

good start

gross

great job