This is, by far, the best Tony/Potts story I have read. Amazing job! You managed to make it romantic but not sappy. The emotions in this story were perfect--everyone was in character. I loved it!!

Bravo for a fantastic story! : D

I absolutely love this story! It's like reading a sequel to the movie! The witty humor, the whole idea, it's just like I pictured, and so fun to follow. Loved it! Massive props.

AW
Loved it.
Keep writing,
Motherducktschool

I loved this story.It was abolutely amazing:)You did a really great job:))

hi! i just read the entire story and i LOVED it! it's wonderfully written. i enjoyed reading every chapter.

This is absolutely perfect. All of it. The premise was funny and you really developed it into a beautiful piece of writing. The characterization was spot on and the banter oh my goodness. :) Amazing job! This is definitely going on my favourites.

I just came across this story yesterday and had to drop you a line or two. This is possibly the only way imaginable Tony could get Pepper to marry him, and they belong together. Every detail was beautiful, and all the characters were exactly right. Very, very nicely done.

OMG! That was an amazing story. I was thouroughly impressed. I love how the painting was the epilougue. There are definate similarities between Tony and Batman in this story. I love the wedding scene. It was so sweet. It was really great to read. It all flowed and I couldn't wait to read the next chapter! Kudos to you!

Beautiful, beautiful job. This is definitely one of my favorite stories, especially for this fandom. I hope you have more coming soon!

I loved this chapter, because this conflict makes so much sense from a Pepper perspective. Great job.

Aw, they said it!

Great update; I love how Tony's respectful of her boundaries, but still has enough drive to pursue her.

A portrait is a great angle and something based in his uber-rich world.

I love how they are both familiar with the reality of the situation, so there arn't going to be any unpleasant revelations later. Great job with this. And I love how Tony has realized a good thing when it hits.

Great, great start. I love how their relationship has improved, but is still reality based with a certain ambiguity caused by the changes their circumstances and characters have gone through.