Aww that was so super cute! You characterized Ash and Misty so perfectly, I loved it! =]

This was really cute. It just goes to show that actions are louder than words. I'm glad that Misty decided to make the first move. ;)

~PikaPie~

AW SO CUTE! well done

This was so cute, I really enjoyed it. I love how Misty took the initiative, it's so like her. And of course Ash, not exactuly the smartest when it comes to romance. It made me laugh :D

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This story made me smile.
I've always been a Misty/Ash type of guy. She was the first one, and in my oppinion the best girl in all of the series. She had grit and determination, and she didn't just flop around when Ash came up with crazy ideas. She was the best.
Great story! Keep up the great work!
Sir Ed

Ah, Ash. He'll learn. lol. cute story!

Aww, that was cute. I think you got Ash and Misty's character right, although the kiss was a little sudden and I'm undecided if it's something Misty would actually do or not. I love Ash's "can we do it again?" line; I think it's just perfect for him. There were a couple of grammatical errors, but overall the writing was quite nice. :)

Very sweet, but too short! But I like it a lot ;)

Aww, I loved this! Good ol' oblivious Ash..
I wish Misty would come back. It seemed like they were going to end up together, and then suddenly, she's gone. Bah.

wow great story I hope that one day they will kiss