This was very artistically subtle! I was surprised, because at first I thought it would be humorous, being about shoes and all. Nicely done!

Oh! Interesting take on Rinoa's reaction to time compression. I got a real feeling of her sense of confusion. How do you fill in the blanks in your life after an experience like that? Shoes are as good a way as any - and less distructive than some.

It would be interesting to explore how the other characters approach the problem - but you may already have thought of that :D

I love how Rinoa chose to fill the gap in her memory with reds and oranges, because they're such warm and comforting colours. And I love the desert (prison?) and TC limbo mentions, because they're truly memories that Squall'd rather not be reminded of.

In short, everything is so great! XD I totally enjoyed it!

It's just so good. I can't even pick a favorite line - the whole thing is my favorite line.