Hi Nat!

I don't have much time at the moment, so I'm really happy that I've seen bits of this before and told you how much I enjoyed it! :P

This was a great insertion of a new character--you did really well at establishing her; she's different and distinct to the other characters. The interaction of the Knights was also great to read from the perspective of an outsider. A little harsh, Ace! I loved reading this. :)