This was quite excellent. I was a little confused toward the beginning, as it didn't really explain what was going on until later, but I still enjoyed reading it. I look forward to the sequel. =)

Oh, BTW- What exactly does WIP mean? I've seen it around the Buffy fandom a lot, and don't feel like taking the time to figure it out. Usually abbreviations like that are relatively simple, but I'm stuck on this one...

great chapter!i loved how u wrote the end...update soon pl.!with a longer chapter hopefully!

Oh my gosh! Spike is alove somehow! So didn't see that coming! Update soon!

Oh, he Shanshued? Angel is gonna be **...

... Okay...

Wow.

That was really good! Plus, that was a really quick update so woohoo!! *happy dance*

Please update again soon!!

I really wanna know what happens to Spike! Will he save his father? Will his father be all "oh Spike! I've found you!" and stuff?! Or Will he even recognise Spike at all?? Ooh so much suspense!! Please please please update soon!

Ha! Awesome. Loved this. "Oh, hello Dawn, how's LA?" "Buffy, its me..." Great. It will be interesting to see how this whole thing works out. Anywho, great story and update soon.

Update soon!!

I knew in the first chapter that it had to be Spike's dad...glad I was right...heh...anyway...interesting so far, update soon please
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MONICA

Brilliant. Though I saw the his-dad-is-the-hellmouth-sorcerer bit coming, it was still awesome! And is Spike gonna get to talk to his mum's ghost? Or did they somehow screw it up and she was actually vamped and this time Spike wasn't there to stake her? Oh... Coolio! Update soon.

oh crap!

XD that was my first and initial reaction XD

Ooh, I simply love this, update soon!

very good so far and I am looking forward to more updates!

omg!not only was the part about Spike's dad kinda sad but that was a killer cliffy!...pl.update soon!loving it so far!

I was a bit skeptical of where this story was going when they came back through the portal the way they did. But you made it all right! Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

I hope you update this soon...it's wonderful!
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