 Kore-of-Myth 2/4/09 . chapter 1AGH I AM SO BEHIND IN REVIEWING AND I CAN'T BELIVE I DIDN'T READ THIS SOONER!
Just fab, I love Fleur and Bill's characterisations and yay for previously-married Audrey! Dom I like too, really cynical...but what is she doing in Ravenclaw...? She seems more like a Slytherin...
Anyway, I can't wait for more it's really good, PLEASE UPDATE!
Keep Writing! |
 respitechristopher 2/4/09 . chapter 1Lovely little story. Rough subject matter, but the interaction between Fleur and Dominique at the end was adoreable and provided the needed exhalation. Adoreable, and thank you for sharing this on the RL. |
 Bad Mum 2/4/09 . chapter 1This is a good beginning. I liek your Dominiques despite her questionnable morality, and I think you;ve done a good job with Fleur and Bill too. Looking forard to more. (Happy to beta future chapters if you want me to.) |
 Fulgance 2/4/09 . chapter 1Online translator, no? Believe me, that doesn't mean much. N'importe ce que is...hilarious. And peu d'amour means 'little love' in the sense 'not much love', not 'my dear little love'.
Compliment time!
Nice idea (poor Dom!). I saw this at the Reviews Lounge and it seemed interesting. Are you going to continue this? |
 theessenceofsyd 2/3/09 . chapter 1Wow- Dominique's got me intrigued. |
 jadedpisces 2/3/09 . chapter 1Overall, I enjoyed the story. I found the beginning dialogue/thoughts a little difficult at first, however. I also found your summary a bit misleading as there doesn't really seem to be any actual relationship here. Thanks for posting. |