What a great stroy!
Im so glad I found this... I love how occlumency brought them together... Very intresting and cute! It was a nice combination of old Snape and new Severus...
Love it!!
Sequel?
:D



-Sileny Nox

Nice Story ^^

very nice

Gorgeous story, totally IC, with a sweet and succinct ending. Love it!

Oh, I really liked this. The way Occlumency is bringing them together this time and not like in the fifth book… eh… And your Snape! Ah, he’s still such a Slytherin even without his memories and Harry is sweet. ““I was afraid that if I returned them, you would become Snape again... and you would forget about me.”” So sweet… Yes, I’m weird, but I think it’s unbelievable cute. xD
“"He?" Harry squeaked.” I don’t know, but that’s so cute. xD I can totally see his face, although it’s not a very… uhm, pretty one. xD
““I don’t love you right now. I don’t know enough about you to love you, but I feel something for you. I think it could grow into love.”” I really hope he will. xD They have such a wonderful relationship here. But maybe it’s the same as with Occlumency. Harry wasn’t ready to do that in his fifth year, but now he can. And one day he will be able to tell Sev that he has fallen in love with him. *__*

But the best are Snape’s different… personalities? Characters? Like that: “…the conversations with Dumbledore and Voldemort (The Dark Lord! his mind hissed at him. Do not address him so casually!), the moment where he killed Dumbledore,…” I loved how he rebuked himself and there were a lot of other lines I really liked, but I can’t find them right now. :(

Whatever, good story! Thank you for sharing it!

Great story and an interesting concept!
I hope there is a sequel to this.

I like it

I really enjoyed this -- Severus kept many of his same characteristics, even as he underwent his transformation due to the amnesia. And when he got the memories back, he didn't just suddenly revert to the old Snape. This was charming. I'm glad as well that you didn't go the stereotypical route and have their Occlumency lesson reveal all the abuse and neglect Harry suffered as a child; that's not the most important thing here, as you've demonstrated. It was about Snape's prior treatment of Harry and his friends, and how Harry wanted to protect his newfound love interest.