I enjoyed reading your story. Things that I liked about it were the way you built up emotion through the narrative, the concept of the piano player and the structural way in which developed the story so that it mirrored the movements in a musical piece. I loved how you showed, but did not tell, delved into the characters' memories and brought truths about the past to surface. It was a very pleasant story to read.

Oh oh this was so good! It's so melancholy and sad that it nearly makes me cry... maybe I'm just sentimental, or maybe I like Vince too much =) I love your style =) Looking forward to more!

YAY FOR VINNIE!!

And yay for piano people!

This is such a great story

I really enjoyed this one shot. It was beautifully self contained while still deep and interesting.