this is dumb.

hee hee, a cat for Kat!
I like it so far. ^^

i love it. you need to write more. and yes i agree with you about the heath ledger thing. :)

this is amazing! please please write more! i lve how you added in Nirvana stuff, Smells Like Teen Spirit is like m favorite song! (btw, love how you titled the chapter "with the lites out its less dangerous") in a chapter you should make them go to a Nirvana concert, i mean they only have like less than 3 years to see them live. Anyway...good job! Keep writing! oh, and i would be like Kat and dive on Patrick when ever he got close enough, i mean he is HEATH LEDGER! The man is soo hawt! its such a shame he died.

I love 10 things I hate about you. And I loved Heath Ledger, I was tearing up when I read this cause I loved him in this movie. And didn't the movie come out in 19?

The movie came out in nineteen-ninety-nine. For some reason it won't let me type out the whole number

This was very cute indeed, with just enough details to keep it interesting.


Keep the chappies coming!

This is really cute, and it gives us a glimpse into parts not shown in the film.

One note though: the movie came out in 19, so you could've included the song, no harm, no foul.

Please update soon! I love the fluff!

i like your story so far, and i think you've got lots of potential for being a great writer, thanks for the fluff

"Annonymous()" pointed out something...I can't believe I put this! I put the movie came out in 1990, but it came out in 19. That changes a LOT. Huh. I guess just the fashion had me thinking...well, I'm really not sure. I found that somewhere online, but it guess from a not-too-reputable source. Sorry guys. (knowing that would've made it a LOT easier to pick songs...I know hundreds from the 90's, but picking a suitable song for Patrick from the 80's was a bit difficult!)

Sorry about that, and sorry for putting this as a review rather than a Author's Note...I just couldn't figure out how to do it.
=)

Actually...the movie came out in 19, if it came out in 1990 Heath Ledger would have only been 10 years old. Sorry, I just had to point that out. Anyway...I like your fic!

Hate it. Physical blow did not make sense. Dialogue was unrealistic. Too much use of adverbs.

Patrick was Heath ledger? Huh.
This is really good I love jane u made me want a kitty but I'm allergic :( o well fabulous story bit I dunno really what to say cue I don't remember the movie very well. I hope u know who this is anna beertzer. I need a cool name how about emulie ahlestein? Or jemily nahles? Emalie sahles? Hm

Ur gonna be a famous writer some day and I'll be so excited for you!

"Patrick cuddling Kat and Kat cuddling the cat."
You HAD to have been DYING to get that line in there as soon as you introduced the cat. =D I laughed out loud, which i guess is kinda weird when you're staring at a glowing screen (and it did sound a bit creepy as I did it, too...)

And about Jane Eyre! DEAR SWEET ROSSMUFFINS! I was laughing till the cows came home (and gosh..they came home at like, 10 tonight!). I loved every word of it, darling dearest honeybunchesofsweetbuns cuppycakefrostingbite pumpkincheeks! -sigh- Why can't WE have amazingly cool boyfriends like your semifictional Patrick?
Oh yeah.
That's right.
They're only alive in our MINDS.
Dammit.

*love always*
Naked Girl

"Oh, you know - defacing property, instigating conflagrations, mutilating neighbor's pets, abducting and corrupting small children…”
LMFAO. You really had me laughing there, JoAnna. And Ms. Perky and her fornicating...
heh.
I
LOVE
YOU
DARLING!

Why don't you write more often? I believe you're positively marvelous, midear. =D
I think you need to write a book about a certain naked girl starting a naked revolution where everybody gets naked and is happy and gay and NAKED.
What do you say? -puts on eager face-

OKAY. ON TO THE SECOND CHAPTER!
-sings for no apparent reason-

Oh andf by the way, I believe i might just be Kat's longlost twin. FREEDOM OF CHOICE ACT! HAHAHAHAHHAHA. Smoochles and hugglies and EAR LICKINGS for you, my love!

This is a really great start, I can't wait to see where you take it! I love the description and voice of your writing, and points to you for worrying about when the song came out and when the movie was produced, that's pretty cool!

Hope all's well with you and yours,
Grapefruit.ninja