Omg, i reeeeeally like the chapter!

you should keep on writing it!

i can't wait to see what's going to happen w

this is a great story i had started reading it awhile ago when it had like 3 chapters an i loved it. It was a shock when i just happen to cum back to this book and see your story. I hope u plan on finishing it bc if u do i will deffy be here to read it.

very good amazing cant wait to read wat happens next so ecxited

Where the fuck is Perry? LMFAO

That had to be the best line.
I loved Leon's and Michel's bickering.
I love Kerry and Michel interaction.
I loved it when Kerry told him to go fly. shoo.
I could make a list here if I'm not careful...Like when Michel slams on his breaks, Kerry freaks out, and he tells her not to worry; it's just a dent.
I'm curious as to why they are going to 'Perry' and what's going to be there. (Besides the love that will be in the air xp
Paris is known for romance after all...
Update soon )

Yeah that was wonderful lies every second dad was just perfect. Leon still don't see a need for him but am not u and micheal yummy funny

Maria

PLEASE let her end up with Leon! I really love this story so far and I am dying for some more Leon/Kerry action lol. PRETTY PLEASE!

Oh my god that was just amazing couldn't stop till the end I loved it. Who took her in the first place and hopefully her and micheal can be happy. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Maria

I love waking up to a new chapter to read.
I laughed out loud at the comment Logan made about Michel finally coming out of the closet p
You write Michel's emotions so well.
And I love Logan.
Update soon D

(Sorry pressed submit to fast) But like i was saying we love these two characters,so keep writing this very interesting btw did u really have to cut kerry's kiss off u got me to excited Soon!

So i have to give you some serious props because your writing has matured in so many levels.I really like this story its really almost traditional with the mythical reference and creating a storyline to this secret ancient force.I have to say one thing i am gona have to call you out on is the reference to twilight only because the moment you reference another story especially twilight which is so popular it can taint your own story and you dont need to focus any attention to anything else aside from these great characters and this very new angle on two charac

That was great she he host works perfectly hope that was micheal at the end

Maria

Please update soon
I totally just reread your story. It's been so long since you updated, that I forgot all that had happened.
I knew Kerry was the Host. I knew it. i knew it.
And you write Michel very well.
I like him better than Leon.

I can't help that fact. Nothing will change that.
I would like to guess that it's Michel who muffled her scream. Which is why you must update as quickly as possible )

That was nice leon seems friendly but wouldn't put it past him to lie

Maria

i just love michel...

Your story is fantatic please don't stop. I love how Michel is jeaous and to tell you the truth i think you shood make Kerry go out with leon and like him because we all know that Michel comesand goes, buthen again it's your story you can what ever you like just please up date and if you don't can you at leastseenme soething to give me a hint oh what you wont to happen.

One of your biggest fan readers Danielle