Your story had lots of creative potential. I enjoyed reading it. Your take on Commander Cavit although extreme is viable. Here we have a lonely ship stranded in the delta quadrant far from starfleet. Anything can happen and the ugly side of humanity can surface. Take the equinox for example. I wish this concept was explored further in the Voyager series. Great work!

Wow, excellent plot. I always love AU plots like these. I wonder how Cavit managed to pull the wool over Tuvok's eyes for so long, but it's not impossible.

Was hoping that the lack of originality and creativity in this story was due to the author's being too young to know better. Ye ghods and little fishes, this story was pathetic coming from the keyboard of an adult someone who should have definitely known better.

Either Janeway was seriously deluded and/or incompetent for an entire year, or she was drugged for a full year. In either case, the crew including Tuvok should/would have replaced her, if only for their own survival. Hell, the EMH could have done it under Star Fleet regs. (By the way, where would Cavit get narcotics aboard a starship, wouldn't the Doctor have had to prescribe them?
And forget the total logical fallacy of having a skilled pilot peeling spuds when Voyager is stranded in the Delta Quadrant. Rather than call this Cavit's Conspiracy, a far better title would have been CinderParis. Were the Doctor and Harry supposed to be ersatz fairy godmothers?

And please, for the sake of any of your previous English teachers, who are probably spinning in their graves over this bilge, the contraction for "you are" is "you're", not "your". Once can be overlooked. Twice is a noticeable, but minor, slip-up. At three, you've relied on spell check, rather than proofing your work. Four or more is just plain laziness (or is it ineptness?) on the author's part. The fact that these mistakes have been posted for over seven years is really embarrassing.

I LOVE your story! It's wonderful!

I loved this story it was a really original idea beautifully expressed

This is the most kick ass, awesome story I have read in so long! This is amazing! Oh my god! You are like THE most awesome writer!

That was so good! I loved it!

This was a great story about how much pain Tom has been through. Thumbs up to the auther!

That was a really good story!

Great idea! I love it. But it is a long read.

I really liked it. Short and sweet but I would definitely recommend it to anyone else.