Wow. Sweeping romancethe fantasy that's every teen's dream. No AP or Honors classes, a nice robo-form, and all the action in the world. You managed to really appeal to the human core and dreams without even approaching Mary Sue-dom. Since you do such a really good job of hitting it deep, I think just about any human with a heart will love your stories despite the occasional typo.

If you posted this on a Transformers Forum with similar rules as the Jedi Council Forums, you'd win a gazillion awards on canon interpretation.

Oh tension! Man ur storys are long! But good!