Really great story. I like the plot ideas and creepy itachi is always awesome! YAY FOR REBEL SAS-UKE

Love The Story Line, Keep It Up And I Can't Wait To Read The Rest.x.X.x.X.x.

sakura is a complete bitch fuck her and i don't mean in the sex way eather

more now!

I don't really have any ideas because this story is just awesome the way it is! It's coming out really well! I just love it! I just started to read it and it's awesome! I'm dying to read the next chapter! Please update soon!

I have a plot twist for you use it if you like either bring Gaara in the stry making Naru all sad or give Naru a new lover

This is a very good story so far.. Can't wait for the next chapter.. :D :D

Ideas, huh? What about some more character developement? Like, how things are going with Kiba and Sakura? Will the other Naruto characters make appearences?

hay, you got the idea for the Kyuubi and sad naruto from a google pix didn't you? i saw it before. i liked it, but it was sad. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. SADLY, I HAV NO IDEAS TO GIVE YOU. PLEASE FORGIVE ME! (cowers in the corner holding head)

Totally awesome story! Can't wait to read more! Awesome story!

1st: your welcome
im glad you liked it _
oh and it np just wanna help

i'm sorry if it start getting annoying when i point out mistake

but dont worry there are very few

i just want to make shore you story

come out on top -fire come out her eyes and her fist goes up
so ne-who on to reveiwing
um i have to say i didn't find this chap. very interesting because well... in naruto point of view you kinda just repeated your self or the sistuation and that can get alittle annoying

now what i say to solve this problem is

if you must have both char. talk about the situation
then make 1 talk about the actual event

and the other can just be summarys#2: in the begging,(man i can't spell o.0 sorry) in the 3rd paragraph some of the italice are close to the original lettering.

but other then that it was good

i so love it when sasuke said his "little house fly
i though that was cute. PLus reading your story work me up. i could not stop giggling XD

great job can't wait for more!

Have you thought about getting a beta for yourself? It would mae your job much easier
Mistakes-We bth over-react: We BOTH over-react
I would like to have a long chapter every week. This chapter was good. I like the way you twist their emotions.

O! IS IT ITACHI! WHO IS IT! PLEASE TELL ME!

What did Kiba do? I want to read next chappie *cries*.

I think it was great and i can't wait till the next chapter)