Sad but very well written!!

Great job. Thanks for writing this!!

I loved it!

So poignant, but funny too. I love Marion calling Indy on his pity party, and Indy trying to keep his 'impure thoughts' in check. I also like the way you are having Indy use the 'kid sister' nicknames, like Freckle Face or Short Stuff, as a way of trying to keep his distance emotionally. Great job!.

great job!

Very nice