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Evil Wanda 6/10/11 . chapter 2
u use the picture of Cupid from Xena and Hercules, right?
kuehpeipei 3/23/11 . chapter 2
OMG ! Ur story is AWESOME ! Please continue it)
Pendyfan 2/28/11 . chapter 2
Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaseeeeeee updateeeeee! This is just as good as the other one!
bandbabe08sweet 4/10/10 . chapter 2
yay i'm glad i finally found the sequel to "growing for you". i'm really excited about this story, its keeping me in suspense! like the "lime" in this chapter btw hope to see more in the future.
as far as suggestions for this story, maybe in the next chapter you can have peter "captured" by the bad guys (pirates, dark fairies, i leave it to you) to further their evil plans (dundundun!). for example, maybe they need peter pan's blood in order to bring hook back to life, idk something of that sinister nature. anyways, after a few days of waiting for peter to come back, a worried wendy and tink could go search for peter. eventually they find peter unconscious and manage to escape... but the bad guys already have what they want from peter for now. meanwhile, wendy nurses peter back to health, but he has no recollection of what happened to him. after he is fully recovered, wendy and peter move on with their lives while planning a family (3) but unaware of the lurking shadows drawing closer.

sorry if its a rough idea, but let me know what you think of it, i won't be offended. in the meantime, keep up the brilliant work on ALL your stories!
disney1240 3/22/10 . chapter 2
Very interested tp see where you go with this story. Looking forward to the updat...but please don't make it a year(
Ayr 2/14/10 . chapter 2
Hey, i really like this story, i read your previous peter pan story a few years ago, i really hope you do keep updating this tory, and soon! x
Barbiegirl 22 1/17/10 . chapter 2
i love these peter pan storys! so is there going to be a reserection. and peter junior or wendy? cant wait for more.

barbie D
Isabella Evania 10/24/09 . chapter 1
it's perfect! i just want more.. update soon! GBU..)
CrazedHumor 9/10/09 . chapter 1
YOU SHOULD CONTINUE. I can understand if you've been busy...but a cliffie like that is just evil. You can make SO much out of this.

Thank you.
The Soul Sister 6/7/09 . chapter 1
really love this. i loved the firrst one you wrote. that was amazing too. very fun idea making Peter grow up! i cant wait for the next chapter if there is one:]
Wolfinson 3/15/09 . chapter 1
Holy crap. You NEED to continue this one!
Potterdancer616 2/17/09 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed it! Please update soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next!
FreakyFip 2/9/09 . chapter 1
I happend to come across your first Peter Pan story and I simply loved it.

And now that I noticed you've got a sequel I was happy to continue reading.

You're an amazing writer and I was at once enchanted by the words.

Your story is wonderfully written and I really do hope I'll soon get more to read (I feel already kinda addicted).

So, pretty please, keep on writing, I have to know what's going to happen next.-D
Luv2Laff95 2/4/09 . chapter 1
This story is amazing so far! so cute. i love it. um, idk if you were joking about the whole 2010 thing but i hope you were! write more as soon as you can! )
swizterland21 2/4/09 . chapter 1
omg, this is so good! u have to write more! soon!
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