wow!
I absolutely loved this one.. I'm a HUGE fan of RenjiXRukia and really, this one was very will written, although I'm saddened by the end :(
It's strange how good fics like this one don't get many reviews while other terribly-written fics do. makes me mad.

Keep up the great job :)

This was great! I really felt the angst. I also liked that you kept the the characters anonymous (although no surprise who it was) and the dialog indirect/minimal.

aww, poor renji... *pets his pineapple-like head*
and it does make it better if no names are mentioned.

Very well done. The choice of not using any names or direct dialogue was an excellent one. Good luck.

Very powerful, despite the certain detachment that you've portrayed throughout the narrative. However, it doesn't make the prose have any less emotional impact. The blunt and terse language gives it a more biting force, something that wrenches visceral reactions from the reader, leaving them breathless. Very beautiful and eloquent; quite an enjoyable piece that wonderfully depicts an angsty relationship between Renji and Rukia. Keep up the fantastic work!

Well, I can definitely see why you marked this angst. I actually felt sorry for him. I hope it works out for him eventually...hint hint wink wink.