Omg! Harrowing. Intense. Riveting and so wonderfully well-written. Why haven't I found this before?

Nice. What happened? Continue!

Wow... This was amazing. This moment was quite a while ago so I had trouble remembering it but you transformed it~ It was amazing how you described it! And where you started and ended- PERFECT! I think you did an amazing job with this story that I almost want to beat you for not posting it earlier! LoL.

You have a few typos/other mistakes in there that you should probably look over. They appear minor though. Not trouble enough to be overly critical but still big enough to be noticed.

d-(^_^)z

This is so so beautiful! I love it~ I re-read it so many times. I love how you protyed Allen and Crown Clown; along with Tyki! You are really good at capturing and holding the readers attention tillt he very end, I mean it! I hope you do more stories like this, because even though the are 're-runs' they are a whole new experinence.

I LOVED IT!
Beautiful details, occurring in a moment's heartbeat, so carefully described...!

I love you, artbug. :D

O_O Wow. Just... wow. Your writing is so beautiful, and the way you portray Allen and his Innocence is spectacular. I'll never get tired of reading your work. Poor Allen, but oh how this makes sense in context of the manga. So very wonderful.

This is such a detailed account of Allen's thoughts during the fight. I never really thought about the relationship between exorcists and their Innocence, so your fic was really meaningful.

Wow. That was deep. It kind of scared me a little, but it makes so much sense. I really don't know what else to say.

With a heart full of love,

Super Goat Grl

*sigh* Intense... I love how you set up the mood, the emotions...Allen seems so real.

...I honestly really will not ever get tired of Allen aand CrownedClown's relationship as you've made it...

This is written beautifully - I love how you describe Allen's feelings throughout the whole scene.

I bow before your glory. This is more than enough to tide me over until you can update your other fics. Though I'll still be quite anxious to read new additions to your stories (particularly Cross) I'm good with waiting a little longer...especially since you posted a companion story to Transformed! (it works as one!)