i'm a bit disappointed...your basicly telling the cannon story with new chacters

it does have some nice twists here and there, but...nm i'll just be repeating the 1st sentance

it is done well, and i will still read, can't let a little someting like that ruin a good story, for me anyway

cant wait to see wat naruto does about Haruhi's kyuubi state.

Great chapter. Looks like Haruhi is more like her father than we thought.

Very cool chapter. Sorry I'm very late ^^
But anyway, I really enjoyed this. The battle is very well described and I wonder if Haruhi has the Kyuubi too.
Haha Takai has a twi sister ^^ !! Nice idea !

Are you going to show more Narutoxsakura?

Also, no mention of Naruto being related to the Fourth? :)

Haha finally this is the time to reveal Takai's real identity :D
And I really love the way you did it. Analysing his blood and chakra is a very good idea.
I wonder how Naruto is gonna handle and of course what is gonna happen with Haruhi right now.
As always, your style is awesome and very clear which is very good for someone who doesn't speak English every day. Nice job Sean ^^

this is okay

Great chapter update soon.

nice i have missed so many chapters

keep the story going

This is a good story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever.

wow!

your story is "interesting", but two gennins beating Kakashi??, that's never going to happen, even Naruto or Sasuke couldn't do it, and Naruto's daughter overpowering the rasengan already? i mean she barely learned it a few days ago..., don't rush their powers so fast, they're no Itachi

OMG!

Great chapter update soon.

wow!