Throughout this story and The Unforgiven I was seriously like back and forth not knowing what was going to happen next.. at all. To be honest I wasn't quite sure if I was going to like the story, but then once I started reading the first chapter of The Unforgiven I was hooked. I loved how all of the characters were portrayed and really pulled together for Ryan. I also liked the little bits between Eric and Calleigh! But it also showed Horatio being really comforting and never giving up on his team which I absolutely loved!
Great stories and I can't wait to read more CSI: Miami from you!

wen she said stay with me i totally saw the e/c scene (forgive me n thx 4 not usin the same line). i think u endd it perfectly!

aww. such a sweet ending.

oh god. sorry to say this, but Darcy did a very stupid thing.

AW, that's so sad! Too bad for poor Ryan, her might not recover now. Hope you have more soon!

aww!I love this story! Ryan deserves a happy ending!

iI'm sure with time, it'll work.

Hearts! thousands of hearts. I so happy for the happy-ending.)

Very cool chapter! Love it! Of course Ryan could always get a terrible infection and have to stay longer in the hospital. Looking forward to whatever is next. Good story!

Excellent! Too bad Darcy is more beat up than Ryan though! Truly looking forward to the next update! So glad you don't do death fics!

my heart is pounding. i hate cliffhangers, but i love this story

Great job! I hope that Jared dies.

Holy hell. I only wish I could write villains this twisted! Please hurry along with the next chap? Please?

my god...

Poor Ryan, how are they ever going to find him in time? Just so you know I don't like death fics. Hope you update soon!