 serenityselena 8/19/11 . chapter 1great story _ |
 anon 8/8/11 . chapter 1 good but u messed up by mentioning uub pan was born by the time they met uub she was in the same tournament |
 GohanSSJ2x 5/6/10 . chapter 1awesome little oneshot |
 Itachi's aprentice 12/10/09 . chapter 1Great work. |
 Jenny 6/27/09 . chapter 1 Great story! It shows the relationship between Videl and Gohan just like in the series, very good :D Loved to read it! |
 Dragon Fire Fitzy 2/13/09 . chapter 1Awesome story and good luck in the contest. I loved the way you put being kissed by Gohan in Italics. Also there were many lines in this fuc that made me giggle like the fact that Gohan 'could' use ki to warm the up haha. Keep up the good work:D
Dragon Fire |
 Kage of Seireitei 2/5/09 . chapter 1hmm i thought gohan and videl were married and had pan already when Goku left to train Uub. But i guess it doesnt matter too much. This fic had a good amount of fluff. lol |
 Random Inspiration 2/4/09 . chapter 1Nice story, one inconsistency though. Gohan and Videl became Saiyanman 1 and 2 before Goku even met Uub at the Tournament. Overall nice story. |
 DayDreaming0f y0u 2/4/09 . chapter 1OMG! That was the sweetest ever! Please don't stop writing. This was so good. I cnat' wait to read more from you. I liked the reference to the Day After Tomorrow. That was a great movie. LOL! Loved it |
 Noryale 2/4/09 . chapter 1Good luck with the contest!
Other than what I already said on msn, I just need to had that they had quite a shitty x-mas eve, lol.
Take care,
Nor |