 Zarazia 2009-09-22 . chapter 1:) The irony of this fic made me laugh out loud! Silly, silly David, believing pathetic old Stoker-canon! :D Twilight really did revolutionise vampires, didn't it?
And it's nice to read a fic in which the writer really captures the essence of Stephenie Meyer's preoccupation with physical appearance. Far too many people forget just how important it is to look perfect at all times. :S
I wrote a fic a little while ago (Twilight- A New Threat!) which runs in a similar vein to this one. You might wanna read it (or you might not; hey, who knows!). Oh, and I think you have quite a good writing style (some description is a little overblown, in my opinion, but maybe that's just me) and I like the fact that you explored an unusual plot-point, rather than just a generic Bella/Edward.
Very funny fic! ^-^ |