How d’you feel about favouriting, babbling in a somewhat inane fashion and then running?

I mean seriously how is it that you are able to write amazing stories that leave me spellbound and yet completely unable to utter a coherent sentence?

There was a strange sort of beauty to it, both of them broken in their own way and both of them looking for something, someone, that they could connect with. Someone who would understand.

See, random ramblings are not good, but in spite of them I can tell you that I really loved this.

Love Lamb

I must say, you have a fascinating writingstyle. Fascinating in a good way. XD I really liked the whole metaphor you had going on, it was very well-written and entirely believable. Good job! ^-^

i do hope you try to make a longer NaruIno fic. i mean there are only few such pairing around and this one is so... cool... and heart-wrenching... and emotionally grasping and..., damn, you know it! So, jeez, man, you have no reason not to make a multi-chapter NaruIno fic.

There is no way this could have gotten any better. You are truly gifted with story writing. This is one of if not the best all together fic i have ever read, and i have read a lot of them

I loved it. :)

wow, that was very well written, and there was nothing that stood out to me as wrong, your whole story flowed beautifully, well done i hope to read more of your works in the future ^.^

Well, um...

It's well written, I'll give you that. Well constructed, too. I think that the storytelling could be tightened up some. The theme should be used more too--it's a good thread, but it doesn't quite hold through all the sections. Close, though. I shouldn't complain too much.

It's a pretty good piece, but not really excellent. I can't put my finger on the flaw, but it's just not quite there.

One of the best Naruino fics I have ever read. Brava!

I love this theme. the pairing itself isn't one I ship, but this was written fantastically. so real and heartfelt and emotional. great work, keep it up!

Hey,

This is one of the best NaruxIno one-shots I've ever read. Very well thought out and presented. I love how believable you made it; the paper doll analogy was perfect! Very, very good!

Thanks for the story,
Ja ne,
KatanaUser

I like the overall theme and reasoing behind this piece. I think you could have been alittle more clear in the middle. I got lost a couple times. But I think overall this is very good, heartwarming, and angst at the same time. Definately, a great ficlet in my mind.

I loved it.

Really pretty. I loved the idea of it, something I'd never thing of. So very touching, too.

i'm speechless...
that was beautiful...
it's the best Naruto/Ino one-shot I've read so far...

wow, i never thought of the paper doll logic...
you did awesome!
i enjoyed reading it!
good job!