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Avatatofchaos 2/25/07 . chapter 7I like your stories that I have Read will you up date this story. And I think you should change the summary to X/A as well as X/F romantic With Cordelia thrown as well if people like the idea. A fter the man deserves every thing he could get. |
American Soldier 11/12/05 . chapter 7Will you please resume this story? AS |
KColl2003 5/8/05 . chapter 7Yes, Faith was the real Slayer. The Spirit passed from Buffy to Kendra to Faith. Plus, Faith might have made mistakes, but she never turned a blind eye to a vampire's muderous rampage. Good recounting of the stupidity of keeping the murderous (but very hot, so of course wonderful) Spike alive. |
WBH21C 3/22/05 . chapter 7OUTSTANDING! So glad to see more of this one! |
WBH21C 2/17/05 . chapter 6So very well done! |
dogbertcarroll 1/17/05 . chapter 6CH1 Great first chapter. It's got a good hook. CH2 Major self esteem issues. CH3 The curses was a nice twist. I figure we'll discover Xander was already suffering from the family curse. It'd fit his life. CH4 Good chapter. CH5 "I think we broke him." LOL! Great chapter. CH6 Good chapter, but it needs some editing. |
mfkngst 1/12/05 . chapter 3nice to see that Xander has atleast two loyal friends. i just hope Anya stays that way after she notices the closness between Faith and Xander. |
mfkngst 1/12/05 . chapter 2Yeah faith loves him! I loved seeing Xander put Buffy in her place, and that he finally opened up to everyone. He will feel better for it. hopefully |
mfkngst 1/12/05 . chapter 1On the show, Faith only really emotionally shared herself to three people, maybe four. The mayor, angel, Buffy to some small( very small) degree, and Xander. So I am glad that you have Xander going to get her, because I think something like this would have happened. She opened up to angel, and I think at the moment she would have opened up to Xander too. So I am glad to get a chance to see how that works out. |
heatherjwood 1/11/05 . chapter 6Xanders Life: Hot blonde Hot redhead Hot tall rich type brunette Hot short sexy type brunette Big hulk guy ready to protect him Father figure who 'loves' him Good job Good apartment All this for a guy who was so worried about his future? Lucky bastard. |
RTds9 7/15/04 . chapter 5Ok I want more of this!I loved every damn bit of it.I love how ungrateful Buffy is losing all her allies.I also would like to see more of F/X and lets get more Oz in the all around damn good job! |
ms8309 7/27/03 . chapter 5hello I have just read your fiction: Pain and Consequences I have noticed that it was a long time since u updated it.. and I'm wonderign if u have given up on it? I hope not cause I like it alot.. I really hope that u do something of that A/F/X situation D |
Darklight 4/18/03 . chapter 5great fic, more chapters coming? |
Schiavona 2/13/03 . chapter 5This is a great story, I've really liked the way you have taken these five chapters. I really hope that you will continue to add to this story as I most interested in seeing where your ideas for this AU are headed. Again this is a great story and it is being added to my Favorite Stories list. Thanks Chris Patton |
Wheeljack 1/12/03 . chapter 5 Great story... I really liked this. I'm working on a little Xander/Faith tale myself at the moment and it was interesting to see another perspective. I like that you tell Buffy and Willow's pig-headedness as it is. I love the idea of Xander becoming Faith's watcher also. And I really loved the scene where Xander hands it to Buffy over her selfishness. One question, though... When are you going to finish it? |