awww! i dont know much about vampire knightm nor have i watched it, but this is really well written, and i can see the colours and images in my head pretty well anyway.
poor Arisu... poor Takuma...

aw...so sad lots like romeo an juliet tho.. its really good

make it a story it's so nice and sad i want to read more

Firstly, I have an oc that smells like roses too (I love finding simmerlaer details like that between stories.
Secondly, if Arisu is a human than an anti vampire gun can't hurt her right?

And thirdly, post the whole story please I don't want it to end like this It's to sad.

now that Arisu is dead what will Takuma would do to his life, pls. published the whole story.

Update Plz!

D Ah... So sad D:

I love this story so far. I hope you continue it.

If you do, don't let her die. xD

Love it!

Heh, one of my one-shots looks like this one...

Anyway, please post the entire story! I wanna read!

Kim

J-chan 3 me love it so much..how you got to this point even though u havent uploaded the complete story..so interesting..me wanna read more..dont leave me in suspense(wanna know it all
tc.

Love it! T_T

Aw that was cute. Sad end, but I loved it!

Hey!

Woah, this was seriously amazing. I loved how you didn't go into so much detail about the OC, but I still manage to know enough about what she's like (both appearence and personality wise.) I also like how you kept people in character, like Zero for example. I can just imagine it, that's probably exactly what he'd do.

Great Work!-Kaiyako]

waa! waither eyes turn red...

So she's a vamp?

...

Is thatthe reason why zero's gun got her?

i luv this as in,,please publish this story,

with mystery,,i think she's a vampire too,

ah is the meaning of watashi koishii? i dont understand japanese,