Good story point of view ! But I don't think Iason's known Rikki before he rescued him in...

Brilliant work! Simply brilliant!

this was amazing..i loved it!

simply wonderful.

i love the way you write, can't wait to read more

woah amazing! *favs* I absolutely love your style of writing)

I love the ending last line is perfect.

perfection dared to transform itself into mere words.. that was beautiful. you should really try and make a story. It's hard to make a story with Ai No Kusabi since they die in the end but I'm pretty sure you can pull it off. If you're gonna do it... please contact me. -.- thanks

Just read your fic.

it's quite an interesting and good version of what might be the reason for Iason rescuing' Riki that time.

I hope to see some more of your fics for AnK.

This is a well written story. It's also a very interesting take on the begining of Ai no Kusabi. I always thought it was suspicious when Iason suddenly appeared and saved Rikki in the beginning of the 1st OVA, and this fanfic gives a plausible explanation for it. Good job!

I loved it but you should change the quotation marks on "former" employer. to former "employer". because he was former. But the thing he was wasn't an employer. so that should be changed. and that's the only thing I would change. I hope you don't get mad or anything. anywayz I was also wondering if it was a set up. Because for Iason to come in at such an opportune moment couldn't have been an coincendence. Coolness thanks for writing.

Weehee! That was wonderful! And Ank leaves so much to the imagination that this might even be possible. :P I mean, seriously, we're supposed to believe that Iason pulled up in his limo to stop a random fight for NO reason? Puh-lease! We ALL know he did it cuz he was hoping to get laid! Heehee! I'm off to see if you have any more Ank. This stuff is hard to come by.

Excellent! This so fits with the story of Ai no Kusabi. I always wondered how Iason just happened to be passing by. Thanks for clearing that up!

Very interesting point of view. never thought that Iason planned all of this to ensnare Riki in becoming his pet. 10 out of 10. Brillant!

This is so awesome. XD I love how you have it end on Katze's POV. Wonderful work showing Iason's gradual descent from a prideful Blondie to who we know him as now. Please write more soon!

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