|Reviews for Mousetrap|
| 64teeth 4/22/13 . chapter 1
interesting story:) but I'd love more of it be from Iason point of view... more of what his thoughts was on seeing Riki and so :)
| Laptop Newbie 8/8/12 . chapter 1
The vocabulary is impressive. I love this alternate yet canon storyline. I did think that in the anime, as most other yaois, the reason for Iason's initial interest was implausible. This solidifies the plot. Characters were quite in character but I would like to have looked a little deeper into Riki's point of view. His personality so far only shines through his looks and those of his actions seen through Katze's eyes. I like the constant use of story terms like Furniture and mongrels and also the descriptions of places like Ceres and Tanagura. Another chapter would be insightful. Wouldn't want it to be forced onto you though, with such a nice hanger you got there.
| Nemesis La Algol 3/24/11 . chapter 1
Good story & point of view ! But I don't think Iason's known Rikki before he rescued him in...
| ElegantPaws 10/10/10 . chapter 1
Brilliant work! Simply brilliant!
| Tsubasa2fly 3/27/08 . chapter 1
this was amazing..i loved it!
| Storm Dragon Girl 8/10/07 . chapter 1
| Sirin Black 7/24/07 . chapter 1
i love the way you write, can't wait to read more
| yume no yami 4/30/07 . chapter 1
woah amazing! *favs* I absolutely love your style of writing :)
| perception 12/15/06 . chapter 1
I love the ending last line is perfect.
| Belladonna Andromeda 10/15/06 . chapter 1
perfection dared to transform itself into mere words.. that was beautiful. you should really try and make a story. It's hard to make a story with Ai No Kusabi since they die in the end but I'm pretty sure you can pull it off. If you're gonna do it... please contact me. -.- thanks
| hieiashke 9/2/06 . chapter 1
Just read your fic.
it's quite an interesting and good version of what might be the reason for Iason rescuing' Riki that time.
I hope to see some more of your fics for AnK.
| Lady Psychic 7/21/06 . chapter 1
This is a well written story. It's also a very interesting take on the begining of Ai no Kusabi. I always thought it was suspicious when Iason suddenly appeared and saved Rikki in the beginning of the 1st OVA, and this fanfic gives a plausible explanation for it. Good job!
| susan 5/24/06 . chapter 1
I loved it but you should change the quotation marks on "former" employer. to former "employer". because he was former. But the thing he was wasn't an employer. so that should be changed. and that's the only thing I would change. I hope you don't get mad or anything. anywayz I was also wondering if it was a set up. Because for Iason to come in at such an opportune moment couldn't have been an coincendence. Coolness thanks for writing.
| Butterbutt 1/30/06 . chapter 1
Weehee! That was wonderful! And Ank leaves so much to the imagination that this might even be possible. :P I mean, seriously, we're supposed to believe that Iason pulled up in his limo to stop a random fight for NO reason? Puh-lease! We ALL know he did it cuz he was hoping to get laid! Heehee! I'm off to see if you have any more Ank. This stuff is hard to come by.
| listersgirl 12/19/05 . chapter 1
Excellent! This so fits with the story of Ai no Kusabi. I always wondered how Iason just happened to be passing by. Thanks for clearing that up!