Hello,

I’d like to introduce myself as Zariel Phoenix, an aspiring writer and critic. I had just recently formed a C2 Community, Phoenix: Quality Flame of Recca Fanfiction, and I hope to attain your acknowledgement and permission for me to add your story to my community. Being part of ‘Phoenix’, you also have the choice whether or not to receive a review from me. I understand that many authors have already stopped writing for the fandom, and I wouldn’t want to offend them by sending them a review when it seemed that they already lost interest.

If it’s alright with you, please send me a reply at my email address: stating whether or not you agree to have your story archived, and if you do/don’t mind receiving a review.

To end this, I’d like to congratulate you for the wonderful fan fiction. And thank you so much for your time.

the feel is there and that's great. you're good, try writing more, i'd like to see anything that have kagerou and reina interecting with each other. for all you know, they might be great friends up to reina realizes ohka loves kagerou more...think about it

You did a really good job with Reina's musings! ^^ And your descriptions at the beginning were wonderful, they set the perfect mood for the story. There's a nice flow, and I like the reference to Kagerou as the 'nice one'. Poor, poor Reina.

Heh. That was cool. I especially liked the last line: 'I am tired of waiting.' I thought that was very appropriate for the Reina that you were portraying in this fic. This fic really made me think, and pity (although she isn't the type to appreciate that emotion) the first wife of Ohka. And btw, I like her hair in the anime too!