You are a great writer. You make me feel like I am watching it from the sides! i think you could be more descriptive, but I also think you made it short, sweet and to the point, so i liked it in that way. GOOD JOB!! :P

Incredible. That is forever going in my mind as exactly how she made her final stand. Once again, great job.

That was a great thing you wrote.

That scene was amazing. And Sheva needs 2 get over herself! That was so cool. I love ur stories!

Too short, no emotions, several spelling and grammar mistakes, overused plot, canon-rape...just as bad as your Q&A fic.

I really like this. This is just like how I thought happen that night. You could of added a bit more. But it was well written.

There needs to be more emotion. After their friend is turned in a tree, they just stand there? Yes, they are crying, but there needs to be more. Also, while they are running and see monsters, that's all. You need to have them fight.

Absoluty amazing!

This was pretty good! There aren't many fics out there that describe this scence, and you did a pretty good job with it! Everyone was in chracter most of the time, too!