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Hm... Good job! I've never read a Matt fic before, but I really liked this! Details were amazing (VeggieTales lol). You captured the raw emotion really well too.

I guess all of us shared the same opinion of Veggie Tales when we were little. XD

"like the monsters he’d feared after watching Veggie Tales. Vegetables weren’t made to talk; it was unnatural." Awesome detail haha.

This story is really well thought-out. It would fit into the manga perfectly!

I don't know whether to laugh or say "Aw".

Anyway, great story, I love it. Matt and Mello were totally in character and the nightmare about Matt's past was a really good concept. I give a thumbs up! Ha ha.

Thanks for the awesome read!

I like it. Poor Matt... Great story.

TDH