That is quite interesting. :) I liked it even though I didn't really understand some of the things that were going through Marcus's head. I stil liked it though.

Keep Flying

I like that..."The hunter trapped FOR his prey." Perfect!

Wow, this was AMAZING. By far, the best look into Marcus' mind I've read so far... ever. His thoughts are so poetic! :)

I loved the way you referred to many things as instinct and then how others, such as:

"Aro’s acquisitive touch."

are so blunt and expected, and so Marcus. :D It really captures his mood, methinks, and is beautifully, perfectly done.

I also love the way that he sort of went inot a "trance" almost when reading their relationship. All of those stanzas about their love-really sweet and super-delicious to read. Is is almost liek Alcie going inot the future? Does Marcus just sort of blank otu almost for a moment and just... sense. It's very hard to describe, so massive kudos to you. :D

I really enjoyed tyis and can't wait to read more form you. Post more soon!

Regards

Lemon/Annabella

LOL You did all the writing, girl. :) I just helped you hone it a bit. Beautifully done! I especially love the imagery of "ivory and alabaster" - both precious, both similar, and yet so different (one living and one stone). Great job! :D

Awesome! Poetic and beautuiful. Truely what their relationship is.