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Reviews for: The Last Heartbreak
Avaira
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
That made my heart wrench. Short, but it go to the point. Will there be a continuation with Irie's point-of-view?
nemo
2009-02-08 . chapter 1
="[ Poor Kotoko... You used short sentences well in this story, making them sharp, cutting into the reader's attention. But compared to the rest of the story, the last line didn't really make sense to me... Anyways, I like your writing and i hope to see more of your fanfics!
SS Felton
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
please write more. i loved the angst and it seemed like a valid future
satomika
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
aww...
it's sad...
i hope to read naoki's POV about this...
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