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Tyndie
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
To parrot everyone else on the comment board: You had me fully and completely confused until the last line, and then I laughed for a good five minutes. Then I read it over again and laughed some more. And I'm still giggling.
Great story!
Ann Jinn
2009-08-28 . chapter 1
Cleaning up stories I wanted to read before the computer decided to make its way to where ever the blue screen goes.

I did not expect the ending at all. Well done.
Xaja Silversheen
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
LOL!

I so didn't get what it was until the last line, well done!! I thought Qui-Gon had gone to the dark side... ;)

What was it, anyways? Or do I want to know?!

Love it!

/XS\
Loopstagirl
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
HA! i was so fooled by this-spent the whole time thinking "since when did qui-gon turn into a murderer", then read the end and just burst out laughing!
it was fantastic!
AnEmotionalVampire
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
Haha! You had me totally fooled! That was great. LOL.
Nahrikira
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
This is so awsome! I was like how can it be horror and humor? So I had to read it, I got to the end and I was like "What? Oh.." then I read the whole thing over again laughing the entire time. Poor Qui-Gon, I was thinking such horrible things about him.
WhyMustIWrite
2009-02-26 . chapter 1
lol. Oh my. This story is so creative! I knew, unless the story was /majorly/ AU, that this had to be more than it appeared, but for the life of me I couldn't figure out what.

After reading the end, I had to reread the story from the beginning, with that perspective in mind. I just had to laugh. Obi Wan's a bit melodramatic, isn't he?

Loved this. *grins* I'm still trying to think of a prompt, and I thought maybe reading more of your works will give me a sense of what to ask for.
Metoria
2009-02-08 . chapter 1
XD I actually thought Qui had killed someone! And that he was coming after Obi next! Had no idea it was actually dinner! Nice job!
Osprey Eamon
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
Had to read to three times before I figured out what was going on. Bit like one of those pictures that look like a face from one angle and a rabbit from another.

...the cafeteria must be... (shudders)
Tashilover
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
For a moment there, I was getting a little worried. It's not everyday you read something like this. I enjoyed it immensely! =) You should do more challenges.
TheMacUnleashed
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
LOL! Saw this first when I was lurking around the JC Boards. Great job!
Geri K
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
I hate to think what they were going to have for dinner if it took Obi-Wan that much suffering to clean it up.

The moral of this story "Don't let Qui-Gon cook"!
Funny.
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