 ErnestTheGuy 2009-06-23 . chapter 1o, what a beginning this would be. an actual chance that the Doc might get a happy ending. and man, you really do have a thing with pairings. |
 shinneodeus 2009-02-12 . chapter 1One of the oldest trope in sitcoms. The main character booking two dates at the same time then trying his/her hardest to do both. But with a character who normally doesn't have that kind of thing happen him. Very well used. Suprise that both women bonded with each other and in the end now are actually interested in him. don't know if that is good for him or bad.Time will tell I guess.
Read you later! |
 RonHeartbreaker 2009-02-11 . chapter 1Oh the hijinks!
Cute tale. And also kind of disturbing. Amy seems far too normal at this point in the BE Universe - though a good, broad "yoo-hoo" does help. |
 Han dj 2009-02-10 . chapter 1hehehe...then Drakken will be the most sought after bachelor ne? Sometimes looks can really be decieveing, what really matters in my opinion aside from the brain is the heart (Although anatomically speaking, the seat of emotion is on the brain not the heart!), lol...
I'm sure if you write a sequel to this, the story must be very hilarious! I'll look forward to it if you decided to write on it (Though I still like a Betty Viv) but sometimes we need to have a break from the normalcy ne? |
 Etherelemental 2009-02-08 . chapter 1I'm wondering if you're planning on another chapter for this fic or if you're going to put the technical sequel to it in another fic, as you've done quite a few times with other fics. Either way it really was quite interesting. Although, adds another point to me on why it's not a good idea to drink any alcoholic beverages. But I was quite amused at Drakken's reaction to when he realized he had two 'dates' on the same evening. Anyway, thanks for posting this! |
 Hobbes the Cat 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Oh that is so wrong. And frikkin hilarious!! Poor Drakken! |
 noncynic 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Drakken may have an intersting future, akin to the kind referred to in the Chinese curse. Nice story/ |
 List of Romantics 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Funny, but...
--The Beginning?--
If you mean a Zombie Apocalypse, then yes, this most certainly is the herald of mankind's destruction. Vivian and... Drew-hmgh (almost couldn't get that out, my "Linda Blair" gag reflex went into overdrive)... *shudders*
Resist the urge, KiY; it's as bad as putting Motor Ed and Betty Director together (or Ron and Kim or Shego ;p), then dropping that idea on the the floor of a truck-stop men's room floor, only to remain their till its next cleaning or the End of Time (which, funnily enough are the same date, a Tuesday, I think) -Oh, the Horror! THE HORROR!
If I may make a suggestion? Vivian can have looks and brains, introduce Vivian to Anne's younger sister, Michaela. A pediatrician, almost a carbon copy of Anne, but 10 years younger; an "accident," when the airlines lost her mother's luggage and birth control on a trip to Fiji.
It's just an idea, admittedly a much more appealing and digestion-friendly one. Do what you will... the horror *shudder* ;-) |
 Twin-3 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Dr. D! You sly dog you! *nudge nudge wink wink* Didn't know you had it in you! |
 Thomas Linquist 2009-02-05 . chapter 1I have got to find the bunny that bit you with this one! It must have monstrous teeth. The Angels are going to have to know about this.
(Scribbles a note about the possiblity of live traps.)
I figured that once Drew passed out, Amy and Vivian would recognize where their skill sets meet.
Now the competition could get ugly. Remember the old pictures of Archie being pulled in different directions by Betty and Veronica? Insert your characters, and away we go.
Now what if Zita...? Nah! |
 A Markov 2009-02-05 . chapter 1The restaurant scene is much improved. Amazing how just a few lines makes that much difference.
As I said before, I love the concept of this story. And now I'm looking forward to finding out how it all pans out in the end.
Alex. |
 sweetPixiesmile 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Go Doctor D!
Every mad scientist deserves a good turn, and although Doctor D can be whiny, bitchy and self-involved, he really is a nice guy (at least in the BE-verse). Unfortunately, Drew will wake with a hangover and think he's batting oh for two when he's actually yet to mark a loss.
Very funny and endearing that Drew didn't want to disappoint either lady, but I wonder if Amy and Vivian were to truly start a tug-o-drakken if the good doctor would survive intact. Or perhaps Amy should just clone him for good...?
A nice light-hearted fic pre-valentines, but now you've totally piqued my interest... |
 Mr. Wizard 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Oh, dear...
If you stop here, it's wonderful, evil seed you've planted in the imagination. If you continue... |