Great Shep whump.

And yes John after reading her latest fic, the galaxy is out for you and your left arm.

Well done. That's a killer prompt, but your Rodney is snarky, your Teyla is soothingly demanding, Ronon is well...Ronon ;-) and John is lovely and panting and heroic. Guh. I loved:

"Can you walk, John?"

"I. Can. Run."

Lovely! I just really wanted more of the "he's in shock" part ;-) But that's being greedy.

t'pring

"You wanna repeat that, Rodney?"

"Yes, please do enlighten us..."

"Get on with it!"

"Well, if you insist... I was just saying... not that it's that important... well, I guess it might be... if you relly thought about it... well... um... that was... funny?"

"That's the best you can do?"

"Should you not have used the word humourous perhaps? To have further added that the voices are, indeed, true to character? That our comprehension of the plot was in no way hindered by the lack of narrative. Or to have referred to the injuries sustained by John?"

"Yeah, like good whump."

"Oh, come off it?!! Who uses that word? Seriously? Ever?"

Great job! The beat was fast and I was done before I was ready to let the story go. Thanks!

All I can say is ouch! Nicely written. BlondieChemGirl

Very funny - in it's own whumpy way! Loved the dialoge...dead on...no wait not dead. LOL! Thanks for the laugh!

This was fun to read. You have captured the characters brilliantly with the dialogue which isn't easy. I always find dialogue the difficult bit to write. Well done Strey.

liked it!

I certainly got the idea of what was going on with just the dialogue.