WOW! Max has very angsty thoughts, but I think that this is excellent all the same. Are you going to write more? ^_~

That was awsome. ^_~

That was really good. And I noticed that you remembered to write her thoughts in the third person, a lot of writers miss that. ^_~

That was good. You really did Joshua well. Please write more soon. ^_~

Loved this one. A very nice look at Alec's Thoughts. ^_~

Hate Asha, like the fic. ^_~

Cool! This was the best characterization of all three chapters...and Joshua-speak is hard to do, so that's really something.

Okay, I like the idea of Alec working to find the cure for that virus. I've been thinking that, too. This was a good chapter, mostly, but I thought Alec's characterion lacked the bite it usually has on the show. You're right on about him having feelings for Max, though, whether they be romantic or otherwise...there's something there.

Oooh...bitterness, anyone? ;) Can't say I see Asha as being that much against Max or anyone Logan's interested in...but you gotta wonder sometimes why not. I liked this...probably because I don't like Max too much right now :P And I think Asha and Logan would be adorable together!