Brilliant. I love the flash backs, I love the depth of it all. In all, a great diagnosis. Mina/Rupert forever! (and tell me, am I spelling the name wrong?)

Ah! I never realised how full of supressed love Demons was. :) I love the angst, and seriously, super great writing. I got chills from the last section. That when you know something's good. :D

beautifuly written, i love this fanfic and the whole Mina/Rupert thing =) great job!
By the way who is Jay and Jenny?

Aww! It sounds so much like them!